Thread:RoseCupid/@comment-33870444-20180805015344/@comment-25628880-20180805022153

Nice to meet you, and thank you! I must say, your entries are quite well-designed! If I may, I'll provide a bit of critique on them.

I hope this helps😊
 * Lawrence - I like how, in his design, you take a color scheme and you stick with it throughout the entire outfit. It's kind of amusing how he has almost the exact same clothes as one of my other FCs, Nicholas, excluding the selection of pants🤣Anyway, in regards to Lawrence, the polo shirt, sleeveless vest, and belt all complement each other well. His design is well-executed and there's absolutely nothing to modify.
 * Carla - She's very cute and I love the selection of the shamrock shirt paired with the plaid skirt and the laced wingtips. What I will say is that I feel like the ruby red and olive green colors should be distributed more because they seem a little out-of-place if they're not incorporated all the way around. I would recommend replacing the solid color beanie with the paisley beanie, making the base color ruby red and then using the same mauve and olive colors for the paisley print. Other than that, I don't see anything else that takes away from her perfection!
 * Oscar - In all honesty, each component of his design is something that would look atrocious if it wasn't complemented with the other clothing items. With that said, he looks great. I'm surprised at how well the marinara shirt and the Bavarian vest work well together! However, if I can be oh-so-critical, I feel that the blue buttons on the Bavarian vest are just out-of-place. I would recommend changing them from blue to silver, the same shade that you used for the tip of the cadet cap and the two-tone shoes. That's all I have for him!