User blog comment:IrritatedSalt/My Opinions On Your Characters!/@comment-34212301-20181007015525/@comment-33870444-20181007021447

Ray - Ray is something I haven't seen before. He's very diverse, and has some interesting colors you've used. The purple burple shirt is one of my favourite clothing items, (Even though none of my FCs are wearing it. XD) so him wearing it does please me. The name Ray is very good aswell. But there are some little things that I think should be fixed and could possibly make him stand out better. I think you should try find some different shoes for him, and try experiment with other hairstyles.

Abigail - One thing about Abigail that some FCs tend not to have is a theme. I think Abigail's got a pretty good theme. I like the tie-in with her heart shirt colors such as blue and pink that you've used, as well as the "innocent" look on her face. Abigail is certainly a long way from being one of my favourite FCs, but she's pretty good.

Alicia - My favourite thing about Alicia is the color scheme. I love the purple and shadeofpinkthatIforgotthenameof pattern on her dress, aswell as her shoes and bracelets. Speaking of dresses, they tend to have a problem. Usually, FCs that have dresses can sometimes look a bit undeveloped and empty. I think, that to prevent this, you need to add something more to her. I don't know what the heck it should be, but maybe something like a handbag, scarf, anything that you can think of could improve her a bit.

Overall - They are definitely not my favourite FCs, but they are still very good. I have left some things I reccomend changing to make them better. Just wanted to say, but I have an FC named Alicia aswell. :)

My favourite: Alicia.