User blog comment:IrritatedSalt/My Opinions On Your Characters!/@comment-35368671-20181007100743/@comment-33870444-20181013033539

Mollie - She has a pretty good design and color scheme, but I feel like there isn't enough on her. Her appearance just seems a little... bland. The problem may be in the shirt or skirt, I'm not too sure. Just see what you can do with her. I like her hairstyle too.

Fiona - I think her design is unique, but I can't stand that Toastwood Turkeys jacket. It just doesn't fit in with her other clothing choices. However, I do like the orange. So maybe try use a different jacket, and give it the same color scheme as the one shown. I think that's all that needs to be fixed.

Jo Neff - I do like his name, but is he supposed to be related to Matt? They do have the same last name. If that's the case, and you plan to enter him for KCP19, I highly suggest removing the last name or giving him a different one. Clothing wise, I like the top half of him, but I think the bottom half needs improvement. Such as different pants and shoes.Also maybe a different hairstyle?

Overall - I do think they're pretty good, but they need improvements. I've given you some tips on how to make them look better and stand out more. :)

My favourite: Mollie