Thread:CreeperSlimePig/@comment-34518323-20170815214517/@comment-31177480-20170818015950

Koilee Catastrophe Part One Review:

Reviews will be written in italics.

It was a beautiful day. The sun was shining out and you get the idea. It was Koilee's first day of work! Ever since she won the PNC 2017, she was eager to have a good experience. However, Perri was not. She couldn't believe Koilee won against her and Wylan B. Koilee knew this was going to be a great day. Sue would be watching everything Koilee did on the security camera. Koilee was so excited for her first day!

Koilee seems to be conscious about the security camera.

Koilee: Ahhh, time to get to work!

Customer: Hi, I would like a....

Koilee: Coming right up! Carlo Romano, this customer wants this!

''Wow! Suddenly, after saying it's time to get to work (implying that she's still in the house), Koilee immediately meets a customer in the restaurant! Teleportation! Also, Koilee seems to be telepathic. Because she already knew the order before the customer said it.''

This process lasted for a few weeks. Koilee was a very friendly chef. She made sure that all the customers were happy with their food. But one day, when Perri came inside, that's what changed everything.

Perri: G'morning, Koilee!

Perri became half-Australian

Koilee: What are you doing here?

Perri: I'm here to place my order.

Koilee: Seriously? Why would you do that?

Isn't it that obvious?! Perri: That's what all customers do! So let me place my order!

Koilee: I wouldn't let you order if you were the last crybaby on earth! You acted like a toddler when I was laughing at you for a joke! You beat me in one of the rounds!

Perri: It was the voters who voted me!

Koilee: I get the job, and you don't! You should have thought about that during the finals. You had your chance, but now you can't get service here. No food for you! You're ugly, and your bird looks stupid. Get out of here! pushes out Perri

Perri: runs away crying

''Well, according to this fictional story. Koilee is an absolute sociopath. This shows that the person who made this was showing absolute hate for Koilee (and Perri because she used her as damage).'' ''Reviews to be continued... P.S. I am very critical when it comes to reacting.''